My civil servant life reborn in the strange world novel

It's definitely not as bad as the other 2 comments are saying, but if you're bugged by the story, I completely understand. This manhwa revolves around a young man, obsessed with becoming a civil servant at his mother's last request, isekai'ing into a fantasy world. While the characters lack some depth, it's still somewhat interesting with the MC being tied to his past life's goals with an incredibly idiotic and funny stubbornness. The art is ok, it's lower quality when compared with other manhwa, but is much better than most Manhua (which often have a lack of artistic quality). It's somewhat basic, and some of the faces look a bit weird, but overall the art is ok. The characters are somewhat flat, with most having one dimensional features like their desires. They dont expound upon what makes the characters interesting or good, but instead pose a "my dream is ____, so i am ___" like with the green haired boy, he wants to be a knight, so he acts brave. There is no motivation seen as of chapter 23 in why he wants to be a knight, which is my biggest issue. Other than that, the manhwa is average, but not great, which is why I gave it a 6/10

As on chapter 11, this is bad. The writing is bad, the story is bad, the art is subpar or at best below average, and the characters are thin and uninteresting. It's not worth your time. It's dogwater. Don't read this manhwa. Your better than this. Your time has value. Who hurt you? I Believe in you. First red flag that this is terrible. The fact that this is an isekai and the entirety of the MC's motivation is only explained in chapter 0. Not the actual story. Why? I don't read chapter 0 because it's just a preview and usually just full or spoilers that can ruin any twist of the first 20 chapters. But even outside of that, why put the main crux of why the MC wants to be a civil servant and the basis for his entire motivation not in your actual story? At least throw a quick synopsis in chapter 1. I only even learned this after a single panel has a modern flashback and the comments said read chapter 0. The characters are bad. We get the never ending coincidence side characters that constantly run into the MC for no real reason. They are also one note. A super obnoxious loli girl who thinks being a loud d*ckhead is a proper personality. The worst kind of tsundere, a terribly written one that is aggressively tsun. Also all she does is yell. Be considerate to people around you girl, your in public be quiet. A similar age to the MC, brother to the loli,  goody goody who wants to be a knight even if he keeps getting his *ss kicked for butting into stuff. Like the thugs who beat him silly could have robbed him and done worse to him and apparently this has happened multiple times. He also gets saved by the MC to avoid death during the goblin fight but at what point do you just gotta let Darwin take him out? He also goes super out of his way to help strangers to the point of him and the loli sister don't always have enough money to survive. Yet when the MC decides to stay in an apparently expensive dorm in the capital city. Oh sweet baby jesus they are there and can afford that. Who would have guessed? Oh wait, thats like the fourth time thats happened in like six chapters they have been in so we knew it would happen.  The MC is a super badass that is probably the strongest living creature in the world. He has no desire to use any of that at all. Wants to be a civil servant, if you haven't read chapter 0, for no reason. If you had read it, for a pretty meh reason. Also, whats with his though process after he reached the capital? First of all staying in the fancy dorms would obviously draw attention. Secondly, you notice your being watched and need to lay low. Guess it's time to just go rob all the rich nobles. What? Why? Motivation? Reason? He's already beyond wealthy, maybe even more so than anyone other than the king of the country, right from the get go when he leaves his village. So why? Also you've shown you can completely change your whole body to look like a completely different human, both in height and build with magic. So why a simple face mask as a disguise? At least change your hair and eye color so anyone who has seen you wouldn't instantly recognize you. Also b*tch you have been using invisibility magic regularly since entering the capital. Just use that and rob people. Why go through the whole Oh I'm the famous Lupin and I leave notes for who I'm going to rob and of what. For what reason? At least give me an inner monologue to this absurd twist out of left field that serves no purpose. Also, my guy. You want to be a civil servant. That means work for the country. Why is your plan to create a giant mess that goes at complete odds to your goal of a future job. We don't even see what you do with the stolen goods, so it's just screwing over the eventual nobles you will have to interact with as a civil servant and all the current civil servants. So like...why? TLDR: On a scale of 0 to I fasted for 3 days and than found the exact porn I was thinking of and busted the fattest of nut. This gets a, I somehow got a papercut on my shaft and spilled pickle juice on it while making a sandwich naked in my kitchen, causing me to blackout in pain.

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